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is a wasteland [4]

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( porcelain seems so much better than
the ache in the pit of my stomach
i'm drowning, or suffocating or
anything but breathing ic an't be
breathing; everything is dark and my
head is spinning and i've forgotten
to take my medication but i don't think
it really matters anyway, i still
feel the numbness through the pain without
riddling my liver with codeine and
cough medicine )

(( but riddling my line of sight instead
is not what i had in mind ))
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FridgePoetProject's avatar
Awesome!!  I love how you barely used any punctuation in this so that we get utterly swept up in it as we're reading, hopelessly pulled into that inevitable sense of drowning in your own mind.  Another great piece!